DantasticDan's Reviews

[Harry Potter - My Scar]

Brought tears to my eyes, Top notch work

BadCookieDough responds:

Thanks, that really means a lot to us <3 :D

[Adventures of Depression]

Like looking into a mirror

[Stick Wars 2-d]

It was alright

You appear to have a pretty good future in flash. I like your animation style. Just make another layer behind all of your other layers and name it "Background". Then draw a pretty picture to entertain our eyes. The white was giving me a headache.
I like your animation style, and great job on the sound effects.

6 - 10
3 - 5

-Daniel

[Maze of Disappointment]

You know what I love about these games?

Press tab to win.

[Minecraft scene creator]

I mean, Alright.
It is what it is.
It's a minecraft scene creator. Why on earth I'd need one, I'm not sure.

This is pretty... Clunky. There are a few things it could benefit from, like...
-A way to delete blocks.
-Better block selection for characters (Such as, Having one static block where you just peel an infinite amount off the top like you have with the blocks.)
-More blocks
-A way to remove that building just sitting there

Also, Your steve appears to be impaling himself with his pick.

Good start though. You might have something here.
Maybe.

-Dan

[Bowlees]

I LOVE the angry birds rip off.

Don't get me wrong, this is a pretty good game and will make it through but.. It IS angry birds. You can't deny it. Just with bowling balls and pins.

Good game though.

9 - 10

4 - 5

[Smithy's Scrap Remix (King-T)]

BreeeEEEEETTT

Hey man, I liked this! It was pretty trancy.
Get the full version of Flstudio!! You need it. Much more to use.

The only thing I recommend is using some better transitions. They were all pretty basic. And repetitive. Although I really liked the last one you use the.. BreeEEET.
>.>
<.<

ANYWAY, Good job c;

-Daniel

KingTornadoTalon911 responds:

The ending Brreeeet noise, huh?...
Well, Nice to know it tickles you fancy! ^_^

THanks for the Response!

[Stupid Song Name Goes Here]

You know...

I like it .. A lot!!!
It really is quite great sounding. Reminds me of like.. Cage the elephant.
Just make sure you make the guitar stand out a bit more. Especially near the end. It sorta blends together and NO BLENDING. BLENDING BAD.
Well with this at least.. With Smoothies, milkshakes, baking cakes, making concrete, and um.. making children yeah it's fine. But in this fine piece of musical collaboration, blending is not what you aim for. Or else it's just sorta noise you know? But this .. I like it. Keep working at it. Message me with a link when you get vocals in. Hell, if you have a band and albums, I just might buy one :3

Keep me posted

-Daniel

[Whispering Death]

Errrr

I play in a real band.. A Post hardcore technical pop alternative band, and.. Well I'm not dissing you.. Just when I write songs I like for them to.. Pop, you know? And this just.. Didn't. I was all just pretty gummed together. Make sure you make it stand out. The only part that really did stand out was after that... Um.. what happened at 2:38? I had to turn my speakers like.. up 5 clicks to hear it.. And then the crazy guitar was like BAM and I was like D:
Make sure.. MAKE SURE You equalize your sound. DO that. Your to do list.

1. No gummyness
2. Make more things stand out.. like... A good type of "BAM".
3. try and make it sound less generic. Make it unique.
4. Alternate drumbeats a bit better
5. Add bass
6. Have fun with it. It doesn't sound like you were having as much fun as you should. Let the music flow out of you. Muted notes are fun, but don't overdo them. Play with your heart not you mind.

There's my short review ;P

(good job nevertheless)

-Daniel

coolio30 responds:

Thanks for the review! As I aid this is my firt song using my new software and is kind of a.... Prototype if you get what I'm saying. I wanted to get the basics of the software down. I'm a novice mixer so this isnt the best quality, but it's better mixed than any of the other songs I've posted. About the drums... It was hard thinking of a beat that ounded really great, so I ued a lot of double bass. And on the topic of bass, I dont have one. I would really like to get one but at this moment, can't. I may borrow a friend's just for recording.

[Reckoner]

Wow really..

Wow, it looks liek my girlfreind :]
(she just hit me)
Again..
and again..
ow
mjkj

sucho responds:

bony wrists hurt somethin' fierce

[Scarvus 'Tooned]

Well

Its a picture.. Made of what appears to be colored pencil... I hope where not supposed to take it serious...
Good i guess..? =]

Scarvus responds:

Eh. I do what I can. I know nothing about computer-based art, nor do I have the programs to do anything. Not to mention I lack a tablet.

[Do Not Feed The Hambeast]

Beautiful.

And true. It is not wise to feed the hambeast.